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Don't Become the Sacrifice by *Ghost-the-echidna:iconGhost-the-echidna:



Don't Become the Sacrifice
Don't give in.
Don't give up.
Don't show weakness.
Don't show blind rage.
Don't let them win.
Don't admit defeat.
Don't become the sacrifice.
Don't give yourself away.
Don't give yourself to them.
Don't look down.
Don't look at them.
Don't look away.
Don't look into their eyes.
Don't become the sacrifice.
You gave up.
You gave in.
You looked upon them.
You looked into their eyes.
You looked down.
They pushed you down.
And you became the sacrifice.
©2008-2009 *Ghost-the-echidna
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Author's Comments

Inspired from The Only One, by Evanescence, especially the line: "Don't look down, you'll fall down, you'll become their sacrifice!"

Anyhow, I didn't quite know what to do for the category of this'n. I think it's kinda scary-ish. Or macabre. ish.

And I chose "fixed poem" 'cause it kinda has a style. It repeats words over and over. :shrug:

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i like it.

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thanks to Bloody-Moon-Tears for the awesome avvie
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i'm holding on to you, i'll never let go; i need you with me as i enter the shadows ~red
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.: :LP::headbang::TH: :.
:iconghost-the-echidna:
Thank you.
It's like old people and soap.
I like it :D

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Anti Non-canon Yaoi
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Everything in that general direction must die!
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XD

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thanks to Bloody-Moon-Tears for the awesome avvie
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i'm holding on to you, i'll never let go; i need you with me as i enter the shadows ~red
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.: :LP::headbang::TH: :.

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